Dear Sir,
I am working in your organization, Vimhans Pharmacy, as a junior pharmacist. I am writing this letter to express you my interest to work abroad in our head department for 6 months.
Since i am a fresher, just passed my academic qualification, i really want to explore my knowledge in our field in order to gain confidence as well as experience to perform better. I am keen on learning new things and in main department there would be lots of resources and tasks related to my job, which i feel will train me better. Also I can gain profound knowledge regarding my career by working with seniors and as a team relatively effective for our company's growth and productivity.
In my absence, i am assuring you my co-workers
will take responsibility of handling tasks assigned to me and will make sure everything runs smoothly and perfectly without any damage to our firm.
At last, I would like you to allow me for this half year course because only you have the power to do this as company's manager. Without your will i unable to take this opportunity.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77889447236 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87816455686 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0159460838 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211475851045 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916956486527 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073601463745 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103447853602 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919743619714 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.