You work for an international company. You are celebrating special family event and need to take time off for it. Write a letter to your boss.
- Explain what the celebration is
- Ask how long you would take time off
- Say how your work could be done while you are away
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply for 2 weeks leave in month of June to attend special family event back in India. I understand this is long period off work hence I am applying in advance so my work can be better managed in my absence.
My grandparents are celebration their 50th wedding anniversary and we are arranging surprise celebration for them. This is also an opportunity for all family members to get together for spend some time with each other.
I would like to apply for at least 2 weeks off so I can help my cousins make arrangement for this occasion and spend some time with my family.
I am planning to clear majority of my backlog items before June. Some items may need to be picked up for which I already started involving Beth in these activities, so she can also have enough time understanding what work has been done so far and we have smooth transition of duties.
Kindly consider this letter as official leave application. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely
Gunjan
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- You work for an international company You are celebrating special family event and need to take time off for it Write a letter to your boss Explain what the celebration is Ask how long you would take time off Say how your work could be done while you are 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd spend some time with my family. I am planning to clear majority of my backlog...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, may, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61184386881 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8569959075 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242265354853 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818376547709 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500719190199 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128003818206 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372430362787 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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