You work for an international company, you have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager,
Describe a training course you want to do
Explain how the company could help you
Say how the course could be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I intend to write this letter to grab your attention on a training course our company is offering for the employees. This 4 weeks long program is about project management fundamentals which are practiced globally. I am interested to attend this course as I deemed it necessary and quite beneficial for my existing job role.
I seek your support in enrolling me in the session and secure due approvals from management. Furthermore, as you are aware that, this training is scheduled outside the country, so I will need your help in arrangements for accommodation as well.
As you know I am currently working in the capacity of a project manager in the department. This one-month long training will enhance my project management expertise as well as, help me uplift my way of work. This session is followed by an exam, which is to be given by choice. This certification will add a significant value in my job profile that will help me in my career ambitions in a longer time.
Looking forward to your usual support.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arrangements for accommodation as well. As you know I am currently working in the ...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n exam, which is to be given by choice. This certification will add a significant va...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your usual support. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... usual support. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82872928177 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90152575095 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8866927112 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290647568868 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10398526551 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071893492511 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156609280681 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659931636575 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.