You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisment for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr. Bansal
I am writing this missive to ask support to allow me to do training on 'Good Laboratory Practice'. This will be one month course as described in advertisment on our internal website.
GLP training includes basic alternative method knowledge in addition to it, People from all nine factories above officer grades shares their knowledge and experience related to laboratory practices.
I would request you to send me on one month official duty to attend this training programme, also, help me provide labtop to bring it on training. This training will be useful to me to enhance my laboratory skill and also, provide me stair to become laboratory manager. Moreover, on company point of view i will be the assest for the organization with training and experience in laboratory prectices.
I would be greatful if you could approve my request.
Thanking you
Yours Sincerely
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ger. Moreover, on company point of view i will be the assest for the organization...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20945945946 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80556781022 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1433982653 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244228471347 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110525928317 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516844064101 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115188616899 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540213271524 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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