Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I saw an advertisement on Youtube that Intellipaat Institution is going to a new course for professional database administrators which includes the advanced versions of administrative skills along with automation.
In this course, I will be learning python coding language as well as an autonomous database on cloud storage. These latest technologies will help to upgrade my skills. But, it will only happen if I will get a recommendation letter from my company that I am working as a database administrator. I am enclosing the admission form of the course so that you will be able to see the prerequisites required before getting enrolled in this course. Besides, the class will be held in the evenings on alternate days. Thus, I will be able to balance the work and my learning in an easy manner.
Moreover, I have talked to one of my team members who is enough qualified to handle all the urgent meetings of our client till the duration of this course. Because, at the time of studying this advanced skills course of database administrators, I want to add this skill set as an asset to our organization by introducing automation in our company. Therefore, I would need to study this alone and prepare a statement of purpose to improve our IT infrastructure services. This will provide us several benefits such as cost-cutting, less manpower, and many more.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 566, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy manner" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ble to balance the work and my learning in an easy manner. Moreover, I have talked to one of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99619771863 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10880161118 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0335939366 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218295389604 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701788338234 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432912404917 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116372539834 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630736269242 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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