Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
- describe the gift -
- how it will be delivered
- explain why you chose it.
Dear Nick,
Hope you are doing great and have been settled in your new apartment. I am really excited to meet at your new residence to enjoy your hospitality on coming Saturday.
But before that, I would like to inform you about the present which I have already posted at your new address. I have sent a gift hamper containing essential items which would be really helpful in your daily needs. Those items contain cosmetics, cereals, a pack of fruit juices, soft drinks, and other household items.
I hope that it would be delivered to you tomorrow around in the morning as I am tracking the order. The order will be coming from Blue Dart through express delivery services. The order no is XSD23421 for you to track the order and check with the delivery partner.
I selected the above items for the gift because you wouldn't need to do the shopping for a week. Apart from this, the party you have organized on Saturday will cover some of the items required to have for your guests such as juices and soft drinks. I hope that I have sent you the useful items for at least a week so that you'll need not to worry about your daily needs and you can settle in your new house easily.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm Regards,
Shwatank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...gh express delivery services. The order no is XSD23421 for you to track the order ...
^^
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...he above items for the gift because you wouldnt need to do the shopping for a week. Apa...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...u have organized on Saturday will cover some of the items required to have for your guests ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...seful items for at least a week so that youll need not to worry about your daily need...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 337, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
... at least a week so that youll need not to worry about your daily needs and you can sett...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u can settle in your new house easily. Looking forward to meeting you soon. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, apart from, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54625550661 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16468616923 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7483043122 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34212433352 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122042600068 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736802670657 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184569653652 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730405503401 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.