You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Hello Sir,
my name is Sara and I am interested to buy some electronics from your store for my new home.
As your shop is in Dubai and I am residing in sharjah which is almost 100kms away, it would be helpful if you can confirm about the products u hold for my need before I visit to buy them personally.
Please find the list attached as per the need of the products and confirm me the prices of each item.
also please mention if you could place an order for the items that you do not have at present along with the time frame to hold the products until purchased.
I would be grateful if I could receive your response by next week for the requirement placed so that we can start the procedure.
Regards
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...onfirm me the prices of each item. also please mention if you could place an or...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...onfirm me the prices of each item. also please mention if you could place an or...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 607.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43065693431 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23619902352 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656934306569 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6058497173 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14660316732 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616127646222 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537686989087 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743183384665 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502629889805 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.