You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to purchase which I would like to do in your shop.
I am interested in buying digital camera Canon D70 and laser printer Canon PR70 which I could connect each other and print my photos by myself. I would like to know that this articles are available, if they are out of stock, could you order this goods for me? How this procedure look like? Should I pay for this articles in advance?
In addition, I would like to receive prices for this items. Please send me information how long you can hold this goods for me in your stock. I am not in Sydney at the moment and because of that I will be able to pick up my order on the 27/02/2020.
If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me via mail or mobile phone. I look forward to receiving your response.
Your faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch other and print my photos by myself. I would like to know that this articles a...
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Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... they are out of stock, could you order this goods for me? How this procedure look l...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s procedure look like? Should I pay for this articles in advance? In addition, ...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ion, I would like to receive prices for this items. Please send me information how l...
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Line 13, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd me information how long you can hold this goods for me in your stock. I am not in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.425 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30670727174 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5068417233 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224421085288 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720237903692 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634765867455 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126494599774 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628285600954 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.