you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, where you think tou left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear Tom,
I hope you're well. I'm writing to let you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat.
It si yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt. I'm not sure where I left it, but assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I moved from your house. If it is not there, please check in wardrobe in room where I slept.
What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocket I left my credit card. So now I have a big headache because of that. I don't have easy access to my money, and almost every two day I have to visit bank to collect them.
I would be really grateful if you could send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in next month but I'm afraid that I'm not able to wait so long on this card. Getting back coat is not so urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will come to me.
Please, let me know if you could do me this favour.
Keep in touch
Sue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im writing to let you know that w...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Tom, I hope youre well. Im writing to let you know that when I vis...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t with long-sleeve and black wide belt. Im not sure where I left it, but assume th...
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Line 13, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I slept. What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocke...
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Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... have a big headache because of that. I dont have easy access to my money, and almos...
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Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in ...
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Line 17, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...are going to visit me in next month but Im afraid that Im not able to wait so long...
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Line 17, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sit me in next month but Im afraid that Im not able to wait so long on this card. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 3.895 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86702303146 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8442413283 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281815190403 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914069647557 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868702817403 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163132496127 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911236769068 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.75 8.71597938144 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.64 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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