You would like to get enrolled in a qualification course. Write a letter to the person in charge of the course and ask for detailed information regarding the course, fee and prerequisites.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the detailed information about the qualification course in which I am interested to get enrolled.
I have completed by Bachelor in Business Administration in 2015 and have 2 years of work experience in IDFC mutual funds as an assistant manager. I would like to pursue with Masters in Business Administration from Amity University as it will enable me enhance my skills and expertise which will aid me in building a successful career.
I would like you to provide the complete information about the course with the details about the subjects included in every semester. Moreover, kindly provide the fees structure including the cost of hostel and tuition fees? Additionally, please guide me on the necessary documents to be submitted in the university.
I am really interested in pursuing this course as this will help me in getting a satisfactory job with a superior position and a handsome salary. I hope you will provide me with the necessary details as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to enquire abou...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...C mutual funds as an assistant manager. I would like to pursue with Masters in Bu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d me in building a successful career. I would like you to provide the complete ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ecessary details as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0972972973 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02762542348 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5446106304 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157361755482 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600247826189 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584531794936 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934124570517 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523227336404 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.