10. A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Rita,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. It has been a long time since we have met because of our sedentary lifestyle. I am writing this letter to remind you about the suitcase that you borrowed from me
I hope that you had a great time in Jaipur with me last month. I am still missing those days. I remember that sine you were not able to manage your luggage you borrowed my American Tourist red suitcase from me. Hopefully helped you a lot during travelling.
You will be delighted to know that I am going to Paris on work visa for three years on 23rd September and because I am carrying some important and confidential documents with me, I will be requiring that suitcase. Undoubtedly, the suitcase has many advantages and safety features. Firstly, it has a bar code lock and many hidden pockets which will help me to safely keep all the papers. Secondly, it is made of waterproof leather which will protect the documents.
My sister Julie is visiting your town on 19th September and will be back by 21st September. Kindly hand over the suitcase to her on airport by 5pm. As she is boarding Air India Flight at 8 pm and her contact details are 9844556633.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rita, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the suitcase that you borrowed from me I hope that you had a great time in Jaip...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reat time in Jaipur with me last month. I am still missing those days. I remember...
^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t month. I am still missing those days. I remember that sine you were not able to...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57079646018 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48376749065 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1365649885 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173074065255 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517097654686 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436470453761 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990253461204 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042073598204 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.