You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends Tell your friend about your birthdayExplain how much the visit would mean to youSuggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

Dear Friend,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to invite you for my birthday party on the 22nd of September.

For my birthday, I have planned a weekend trip to Rishikesh with all my friends.
On the day of arrival, we will spend the day around the river followed by crazy rafting sessions on the next couple of days.
I know that you’re a passionate rafter too and you will absolutely love the tides in Rishikesh.
You will also get to explore the cultural side of India as this place is surrounded by religious villages and temples.

I remember participating together at one of the rafting camps in Toronto back in 2010, and we haven’t met since.
This will be the perfect time for us to catch up over all the years.

About your stay, I have already booked 4 tents, and we are all carrying our sleeping bags. You would require to carry your sleeping bags too. I have also arranged the food so that is not going to be an issue.

I am absolutely ecstatic about the plan and I look forward to seeing you.

Yours Truly,

Gaurav

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Friend, I hope this letter finds you well. I am ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 110, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'carrying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: carrying
...ng our sleeping bags. You would require to carry your sleeping bags too. I have also arr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o seeing you. Yours Truly, Gaurav
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55154639175 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46465610291 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7899966191 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245530371871 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884159915518 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801736647241 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654648200756 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620712608143 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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