You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends
Tell your friend about your birthday
Explain how much the visit would mean to you
Suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Sorry it’s been so long since we last met, but it’s my birthday next week, so I thought I’d get in touch to see if you’d like to come over for a visit.
As it’s my 26th birthday, I thought we could do something special. So far, the plan is to visit Shimla to recall our college memories while enjoying the weather. Then, we’ll do ice-skating while enjoying the weather and at night we’ll go out to a Karoake bar. How does that sound?
It would be great if you could make it over. As it’s going to be my last birthday in India and I have invited all friends. I think I’ll never get a chance to celebrate this day with all of your after getting a job in Canada. It is going to be a great fun.
You’re welcome to stay at my house as there is plenty of room which is perfect for you. Also, it is fully air-conditioned. Along with this, my home is near to airport so you can easily catch us and I’d be happy just telling me your flight details so that I can pick you up from the airport. Hope to see you soon!
Best wishes,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, How're you buddy? Sorry it's b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4380952381 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47888589561 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1796934007 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17688308144 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580992215266 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431040363196 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10722352709 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442350690204 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.