Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day! I am Bobb Brown, working as a Chartered Accountant in your company. Through this latter, I want to seek your permission for the accounting training programme, which is going to be conducted by an international company from 26 September to 5 October at Jack computer centre.
As a matter of fact, American accountant company is going to organise the workshop related to the various Tally and accounting software's, which have been recently introduced by Microsoft in the market. Apart from it, the trainers would also apprise us with the numerous ways to protect the company's confidential information from hacking.
That being said, if I attend this course it would certainly provide various benefits not only to me, but to our company as well. It would help me to gain an in-depth knowledge about the functioning of new softwares and also provide me an international certification. Moreover, it would be beneficial for our work as well because we would be able to purchase and install only these kinds of software programmes, which will not only be cost effective but also time efficient in order to increase the business productivity.
I hope that you would allow me to be a part of this training program. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Bobb Brown
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...provide various benefits not only to me, but to our company as well. It would hel...
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...ou in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Jacob Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07373271889 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94786110785 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9405384812 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185971956379 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787194979376 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431981697671 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102942954391 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056504393294 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.