You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information on the dates, the program, the accommodation and the cost.
Write at least 150 wordsYou do not need to write your address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to ask for information about the upcoming business seminar at the Western Hotel in Calgary, Canada. I have been informed by our company HR department about the seminar and I would like to participate and seeing more information about it.
Firstly, I wonder if you could possibly give me a small overview of the event. I would be interesting to know about whether organizers are arranging accommodation for the participant.
Secondly, I would be grateful whether you could tell me what the cost is for attending the program. Furthermore, I am looking for information about nearby affordable restaurants and hotels.
Lastly, I wonder if you could provide the commence and end date and time of the seminar. Also, if possible please, share the map of the city and let me know how to reach the venue.
I would really appreciate if you could send the aforementioned information to my e-mail or fax.
I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...ion about it. Firstly, I wonder if you could possibly give me a small overview of the event. ...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Lastly, I wonder if you could provide the commence and end date and time of the seminar. A...
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Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and let me know how to reach the venue. I would really appreciate if you could s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94953739927 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.284031573 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261406833253 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908641869512 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685685649164 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109831562585 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813041003837 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.