Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a software engineer in a computer science company now. Fortunately, I coincidently saw your meeting advertisement yesterday. I firmly desire to enroll in your great seminar in Brazil on my present work. Therefore, I immediately wrote this letter for receiving some of your information.
There are numerous things that I am still confusing about your meeting. On the advertisement paper, you indicated your work-related seminar was in Brazil, and right after that, you wrote the time of the meeting. However, I desire to confirm the time zone used in your promotion. Moreover, I want to know about the specific programs you have, the address, and the total expense of this work travel.
Furthermore, I truly want to participate in your meaningful activities, so please respond to this email if you have seen this constant letter. I always wait for your response mail.
With my faithfully,
Hieu.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12582781457 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95963517607 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5278961516 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143434900773 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496594236447 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535553659243 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10011216308 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206835604255 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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