You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am Anjana and worked as a software engineer in India. I was persuaded to quit my job due to some family commitments. I would like to rejoin my work and started preparing for interviews. I have read about your seminar on "Automation-Industry Standards", scheduled to be held in Sydney, Australia in July 2020. Indeed, It would be helpful since I have a gap in my career, therefore, planning to attend the workshop and need some further details.
Firstly, with regards to date and time, I would like to know the exact schedule of the workshop such as what time it would begin and end each day? Secondly, I would be grateful if you could provide a brief of the program. Furthermore, Will the accommodation provided by you or we should do it ourselves? As I am traveling from India, it would be better to know prior. If not, could you please let me know of the hotels nearby along with the probable cost of stay including meals?
I am hoping to hear from you at your earliest and Thanks in advance!
Your's faithfully,
Anjana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...k and started preparing for interviews. I have read about your seminar on 'A...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...held in Sydney, Australia in July 2020. Indeed It would be helpful since I have a gap ...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce I have a gap in my career, therefore, planning to attend the workshop and need...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ed by you or we should do it ourselves? as I am traveling from India, it would be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60317460317 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07141831753 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6413827317 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181178223148 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627518622846 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464251733053 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993100751354 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518104028503 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.