Young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks of such a requirement be greater that the benefits of the community and the individual young adults?
A year of compulsory internship or work experience is the prime requirement before joining a job in any industry. It not only refines the skills of a professional but also stresses on the importance of working for a greater cause than money. I firmly believe that a period of unpaid work experience is compulsory before working as a paid employee in any company or organization.
Beyond any qualms there are a myriad of logical reasons to support the view that unpaid compulsory work internship or work experience is necessary in any profession. Post-graduation is the period when a fresher from the college not only leans to build relationship with colleagues and acquires the importance of team work but they also absorb the value to quality work without thinking about their own monetary benefits. For example, a dentist is required to complete a rotational internship before they can actually work in any organization. It gives them an opportunity to learn new techniques and also to work selflessly for the betterment of the patients without thinking about personal gains. Even the patient also benefit from such deeds as they often receive free treatment from such interns therefore, making it a win-win situation for both.
On the contrary, some argue that unpaid work culture is likely to make the professionals demotivated towards their work and they are likely to lose interest in their profession and some might even quit their career as they cannot cope up with the financial burden of the loans they have taken to complete their graduation in the first place forcing them to join other industries where they get paid to repay their education loans.
In conclusion, unpaid work experience has its own pros and cons and it is up to the professional to decide whether they make it a learning experience to refine their skills or they just think negatively and feel demotivated. However, I believe that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages of compulsory unpaid work experience which the professionals are likely to learn in the future. But will the fresh college pass out students think this way? Still remains a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...zation. Beyond any qualms there are a myriad of logical reasons to support the view ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.85567010309 467% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 937.175257732 191% => OK
No of words: 354.0 206.0 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04519774011 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86800941275 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 290.88556701 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8676972948 44.8134815571 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11266867642 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488674685375 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299487628593 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761419225729 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360734610636 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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