You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Nidhi,
I would like to inform you that I will not be able to continue my pharmacovigilance course from Anovus Academy. I joined this course as I thought that it would help me to advance in my career. However, the current scenario is not allowing me to attend this course. I have a full time job with nine hours shift starting from 9am in the morning. Since last two weeks I was managing to attend the course by leaving my office at 5 pm. However, my employer has escaled the issue to the HR as I was supposed to work till 6 pm. The company HR has clearly told me to choose between the job or the evening course. I have a family who is surviving on my salary so I cannot leave my job. Would you please refund the fees that I have paid in advance. If refund is not possible then can you please enroll me for the next six month online evening course that starts at 7 pm?
I would be waiting for a positive revert from your side.
Regards
Ankita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...wing me to attend this course. I have a full time job with nine hours shift starting from...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shift starting from 9am in the morning. Since last two weeks I was managing to attend...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17297297297 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32010931457 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6991526144 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224391531454 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711044186804 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549071665699 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132327272428 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914219913832 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.