Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say:
Where and when do you plan to go? Why cannot your brother come? Give a short description of the trip?
Dear Mary,
Hey! I am good here and hope this letter will find you in pink of health and high spirits. You will be excited to know that I am writing to invite you for a 3 days trip to Goa starting from 28th of July. I had already booked hotel for that dates. Come on let’s spend some quality time together.
Earlier, my brother had a plan to join with me on this trip but unfortunately, he is not keeping a health from last 2 days. He is having a stomach infection, so doctor has advised him to take a bed rest for 4 days. Hope you will not mind to spare your time and definitely join me on this trip.
Let me explain you the itinerary of the trip, we will move to Goa by my car on Saturday evening. We will reach Goa on Sunday morning. On Sunday, we will roam around the city and spend leisure time at hotel. Sunday night there will attend a night party at renowned ‘’HIGH ROCKS” disco club. We will be start the return journey back to home on Monday evening after completing our shopping.
I remember that last year you express you interest to visit Goa. This is the best opportunity for you to take a break from you routine life. Please feel free to call me for further discussions on this matter. Pay my regards to your parents. See you soon.
With love
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos;s spend some quality time together. Earlier, my brother had a plan to join w...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind sparing'.
Suggestion: mind sparing
... bed rest for 4 days. Hope you will not mind to spare your time and definitely join me on thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your parents. See you soon. With love James
^^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arents. See you soon. With love James
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30204081633 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36133649391 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.720227608 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5555555556 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194264813585 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611976710729 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592530951593 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127574113249 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058457654868 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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