You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines about:--Explain what happened.--Describe your luggage and--Tell them what was in it.--Find out what they are going to

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You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines about:
--Explain what happened.
--Describe your luggage and
--Tell them what was in it.
--Find out what they are going to do about it

Dear Sir,

my name is Yogesh Kumar and I am one of your airline's frequent flyer having I took a flight from New Delhi to Mumbai on the morning of Monday 23rd April. I would like to commend your airline's on their professionalism and service offered, and sure that you will handle the incident with these qualities.

Last week, after the journey, when I tried to collect the luggage; it was of surprise with not receive the suitcase deposited in items. I called your customer care immediately, and they assured me; my baggage will reach to me in 2 days. I am disappointed to say that this has not happened and have received no communication since then.

The luggage is a "<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CBD3F081B7D79D72E624F4DED44A02E2" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Skybag" data-pwa-suggestions="Sjoberg~skewback" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Skybag" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Skybag</pwa>" suitcase; large size and green colour. it has a picture of "Gandhi" over it and flags of the different countries. Clothes, photograph, and my personal documents are there inside. I require these items <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FA1C5D71C8A737CAF04553D691EA1A67" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_426" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: urgently" data-pwa-suggestions="urgently" data-pwa-dictionary-word="on an urgent basis" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">on an urgent basis</pwa> and hope you will resolve this issue promptly.

I look forward to hearing <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2A8231DFECEA2021D5C542EFF1371EA5" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_366" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="back " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">back&nbsp;</pwa>from you.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, my name is Yogesh Kumar and I am one of ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nication since then. The luggage is a '
^
Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... suitcase; large size and green colour. it has a picture of 'Gandhi' ove...
^^
Line 7, column 1017, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you will resolve this issue promptly. I look forward to hearing ^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 937.175257732 198% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 8.59722222222 4.54256449028 189% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.3976695675 2.54303337028 448% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 290.88556701 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.41237113402 170% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.193191179 44.8134815571 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.7 76.5299724578 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0347488680916 0.216113520407 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390977845624 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411298467173 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651393749306 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596903961386 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 8.37731958763 357% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.52 70.7449484536 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 7.45979381443 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 32.6 8.71597938144 374% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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