Your child’s school has arranged a trip abroad for students. The principal of the school asked some parents to join the trip to help. Write to the school principle and say
– Why do you want to join the trip?
– How could you help during the trip?
– Ask some questions about the trip.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to a trip to South Africa that Tran Phu high school has arranged for the students in October and I am very interested in joining.
The reason why I really want to participate in this trip is because this is a perfect chance for me to strengthen my relationship with my son, Nguyen Minh Tuan. it has been quite a long time since we last went abroad together seven months ago.
As I used to be a in a boy scout, I was taught a lot of fun mini-games and I still remember most of them. Therefore, I can help amuse the children while they are traveling to the destination. Moreover, I am very good at navigation so I can help my son’s team find the right directions when we go camping in the jungle.
I would like to ask for some detailed information so that I can arrange my work better. Please let me know the exact day that the trip will take place and also how long it will be. One last thing, do I have to pay for my own flight ticket as it has not been mentioned earlier.
I look forward to your response and to this trip.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tionship with my son, Nguyen Minh Tuan. it has been quite a long time since we las...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er seven months ago. As I used to be a in a boy scout, I was taught a lot of f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25700934579 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44910193148 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64953271028 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1665332809 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224000854898 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721867061246 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514989468962 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121108189629 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437942904148 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.