Nuclear energy is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the source of conventional power such as natural gas, solar and wind energy can no longer supply enough for the continuous increase of daily consumption. Thus, some state that nuclear energy is taking over the role of power supply for its unlimited resource. In my point of view, I side with such idea although there are some risks that humans have to accept when utilizing this type of energy.
Indeed, nuclear power is definitely a potential substitution for traditional sources to provide for the increasing demand. Unlike the raw resources which are being used up radically, nuclear energy is proved to be everlasting and is ready for heavy exploitation. Moreover, because this type of power can be mass produced inexpensively by scientific chain reactions, people could easily see the enormous benefits they get by changing to this alternative. Another merit of using this type of energy is that it can be converted to various forms according to household’s needs such as electricity or heat immediately, whereas other traditional power takes complicated steps to change form.
However, the risks of producing nuclear energy should be taken into consideration seriously. Firstly, since the production of this alternative requires a strictly controlled procedure, a slight leak of one molecule could pose a disastrous catastrophe over a large area. Therefore, humans’ lives are always threatened when having these nuclear factories deployed around the globe. Secondly, scientists have found evidences of diseases caused by the waste products from nuclear producing process. As a matter of fact, 12% of residents of Nagasaki province in Japan are the victims of lung cancer after being exposed to nuclear dust from the local factory.
In conclusion, while nuclear energy is the best way to substitute traditional resources at the moment, human should exploit this source with high cautions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36184210526 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91005962519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634868421053 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6400472882 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202200067601 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770062822671 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582268892063 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133089655296 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311260549151 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.