Dear Kayra,
Hope you are enjoying your last days at work. I know you must be feeling emotional as well as excited, to start your career with another company. I am writing this letter to let you know that I won't be able to make it to your farewell party which is on 26th December, coming Saturday and I am really sorry for that.
I know you are going to be extremely mad about this, as we had planned lot of fun stuff to do together on your party. As, you know that I am one of the speaker at Embryology Seminar which was supposed to be happened in the next month. However, now it is going to be held next week and on the same day of your farewell party. So it will be impossible for me to be a part of your farewell party. As, this seminar will be going on for an entire day, I will have to be present there the whole time.
I am really feeling sad for not being able to attend your party. I remembered how we started our career together from this hospital. The best days were those during our training period,from where our bond of friendship started. I will miss you badly, wish you were not leaving this organization. Anyways, but I am extremely happy for you and wish you all the success in life.
See you soon, Will miss you.
Jayraj Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rday and I am really sorry for that. I know you are going to be extremely mad ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fun stuff to do together on your party. As, you know that I am one of the speaker ...
^^^
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
...ys were those during our training period,from where our bond of friendship started. I...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, really, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20247933884 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22405047584 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54958677686 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.630042315 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6428571429 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38411248314 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13964699962 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814202486075 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268375775426 0.12726935374 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347285802227 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.