Capital punishment possess a great threat to the offenders, however, many people believe that punishing criminals with life time imprisonment is a better option , as convicting the death penalty will also make society accountable. I do not agree with the above statement, as it is important to eliminate such offenders and keep the society safe.
People favoring capital punishment thinks that it helps to deter crime. As, this kind of punishment assures that committing such heinous crime will not be tolerated and it will help to create fear in the mind of criminals. Apart from this, a lot of money is saved that would otherwise go towards their care in prison. For example, in India a terrorist responsible for 9/11 attack was arrested and the government had to invest million of rupees to guard for him and lastly he was awarded the death penalty. The society will also feel safe once such criminals are eliminated.
On the other hand, sometimes capital punishment may wrongly convict an innocent person. To get to a verdict it is really important for the judge to pronounce the verdict the case very carefully. It is better to charge the murderer by knowing the motive behind their act. Offence done with an unstable mind shall be given a second chance. Also, executing prisoners creates a violent culture. And, no human has a right to take person's life even though if it is in the name of law.
In conclusion, I believe that charging with death penalty may take away the chance to reform for the murderer who convicted in an unstable mind. So, charging with the life time imprisonment seems a better option under such circumstances.
- Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales What can make an advertisement very effective Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society 73
- In recent years many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping Is this a positive or negative development 78
- Some think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires special talent and ability Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- In the past older generation was source of knowledge and experience What in modern world they have little knowledge and youngster have idea more than older one Is it positive or negative development 53
- Some people believe that government money should be spent on important things rather than arts such as painting and music To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, may, really, second, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63189816622 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0261965552 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343999965194 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941260045393 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056650850682 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202901918582 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041875476224 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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