Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
Give details about the course
Describe what equipment you will need for the course
Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear sir/Madam,
My name is Sorena and I am working with the Exon Company. I am writing to do an inquiry about the equipment and facilities you have at the local conference center.
My company is planning a training session for the employees. The session is about automation in the industry and would take 2 days. We were very satisfied with our last arrangement there and would like to have this one also there. However, we need to confirm that you have the required amenities and equipment. The required items are as follows:
1- A big screen
2- Video projector
3- Wifi
Could you please inform us about the existence of these items at your place? In addition, Could you also tell us how many people you can have there? Do you have small rooms for small group meetings? are facilities accessible easily by disabled people?
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...e small rooms for small group meetings? are facilities accessible easily by disable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91875 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53349437536 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5987917259 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5833333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155939289437 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571964023279 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498975657295 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075334434704 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324701857445 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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