Your company is going to give a special training course for staff.
Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference
centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your
letter:
● Give details about the course
● Describe what equipment you will need for the course
● Ask some further questions about the facilities at the
conference centre
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability of the conference center from 20 January 2023 till 30 January 2023 for the special training course, which is going to conduct by our company for employees.
As we are getting a new Robotics project from an overseas client, we decided to skill our staff on Artificial Intelligence. Our organization has appointed exceptional trainers, who are the best in the market to train our colleagues.
In order to conduct this training 30 computers along with headsets,3 mike sets,2 speakers,40 chairs, and a projector is required. In addition, basic stationery is essential to write feedback about the trainers every day after the completion of the session.
Furthermore, I Would request you to also please let me know if there is sufficient parking available in the conference center since most of the employees would be commuting in their own vehicles.
Kindly let me know the availability of the conference center, along with the facilities mentioned above.
I anticipate hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Albert James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter t...
^^
Line 16, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Yours faithfully, Albert James
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38068181818 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97796118862 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7253974581 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168376467885 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592716079358 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494477982309 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652658923101 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519221628902 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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