Your company is going to organize a special training course for a few staffs. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference center has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference center. In your letter:
• give details about the course
• describe what equipment you will need for the course
• ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing on behalf of my company, Tata Motors Ltd, to enquire about the conference hall and its facilities as we are planning to organize a training session on “CSI improvement strategy” from 25th July 2019 till 27th July 2019. All three days will have training cum brainstorming session imparted by external trainer from JDP CSI, Singapore.
All basic facilities like mics, sound system, and comfortable seats will be required in addition to a huge digital screen of 3 meters with HDMI facility. Moreover, high-speed internet and a huge TV with video conferencing facility would be required, as our top management will review the fruitfulness of the session. As a celebrity guest will come to motivate our team members on the 3rd day, a separate waiting room will be required as it will be a surprise session.
Can you arrange lunch in the afternoon and DJ facility on the third evening? What will be total cost of this entire arrangement? Kindly sent us a quotation as soon as possible as we need to get the approval from our management.
I will be waiting for your response and thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97461928934 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90442285797 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7031897115 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104269376397 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046172741229 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350174224239 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630798888045 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215864884143 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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