Your company has recently introduced new uniform for the staffs. Write a letter to your manager that you are not happy with the new uniform:
Explain why you are not happy with the new uniform
What you want new uniform to be like
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing to raise my concerns towards the uniform that has been recently introduced for employees and would like to suggest few amendments our organization can make to improve uniform.
Very first point I want to highlight is that the current uniform is too uncomfortable because of ill-fitting. Poor-fitted uniform affects my day to day productivity. Another issue is with its poor quality. Low quality stitching is being used which lead to tears and breakages after minimal wear and that is too embarrassing at workplace.
As departments in an organization keep expanding every year, It is not feasible to size up each employee. Therefore, I suggest that adjustable features such as fabric made of polyester blend to be used to better suit all the body types. Also additional sizes such as XXS to XXXL should be covered for exceptions. In order to improve the quality, our company management should ensure to choose best supplier while placing an order. Moreover, slight increase in the budget will be really helpful to get best quality uniform for its employees.
I hope that you would look into this matter promptly and take my suggestions under consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...used to better suit all the body types. Also additional sizes such as XXS to XXXL sh...
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Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
...our company management should ensure to choose best supplier while placing an order. Moreov...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...pany management should ensure to choose best supplier while placing an order. Moreov...
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Line 7, column 498, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...in the budget will be really helpful to get best quality uniform for its employees. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12077294686 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.864876861 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700483091787 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5596169009 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194490984275 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058326286066 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365860591946 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103326158651 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272769438514 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.