Dear Mr./Mrs. principal,
My name is Tony Lee, my student ID is 001002333. I am writing this letter to ask for your help with my certification of the data science course in our school, becasue I lost it in the airport.
My company send me to study data science course in our school 6 months ago. When I finished, I returned back to my country by plane. While after I arrived, I found my certification was lost in the airport. Because I opened my bag to pass the bag check in the border sercurity control in the airport. My certification was fell out of my bag at that moment. I tried to make phone calls to the airport police, but they said there was nothing related to the certification found in the sercurity check.
This certification is significant to me. First, I should hand on it to my human resource manager to save it in my personal company profile. Secondly, this is essential because I need to show it to my company financial department officer because the company paid my tuition. I need prove my course is finished.
So I am concerned with this situation. I would like to ask you to recertificate my course and send the paperwork to me, I would pay the whole paymant of the delivery.
I am waiting for your reply. Thank you for your help.
Your faithfully,
Tony Lee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...school 6 months ago. When I finished, I returned back to my country by plane. While after I a...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... certification was lost in the airport. Because I opened my bag to pass the bag check i...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54893617021 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76705052051 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527659574468 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8608807042 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8823529412 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8235294118 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196545982204 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679608565542 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671484934686 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103105839001 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591727146391 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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