Your company sent you to complete a course in another country You have lost the certificate received at the end of the course Write a letter to the principal of the college where you took the course In your letter you should tell how you lost the certific

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Your company sent you to complete a course in another country. You have lost the certificate received at the end of the course. Write a letter to the principal of the college where you took the course.

In your letter, you should tell:
how you lost the certificate
why you need it now
what you want the principal to do.

Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well. Recently, I have completed the advanced database administrator course from your prestigious institution as it was recommended by my company. However, the certificate which I receive after the completion of this course has been misplaced while coming back to my hometown.

The certificate was kept in a blue folder which I might have lost during checking out my room on the last day of the training in the Radisson Hotel as I had to catch my flight for the new project. Besides, I had written a letter to the manager of that hotel to check if they found any blue folder and certificate inside it.

As you know, the company organize this training for upcoming business projects and after completion of this course, we required to submit our certificates. This certificate will be a license for presenting the new proposal to our clients in our Information Technology sector. Hence, It is crucial for me to submit my transcripts to the human resource department.

Apart from that, I could not travel because of the tight schedule. Therefore, I would request you to please sent me a soft copy of my certificate on my email id. My enrollment no is GHVJBC122 and my email id: mailmehna@yahoo.com. I hope you will be able to find my transcripts and degree with the information that I have mentioned above.

I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...rtificate on my email id. My enrollment no is GHVJBC122 and my email id: mailmehna...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89516129032 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02025550049 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2693518159 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24448477537 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797828390216 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527761069551 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129299158491 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616631904879 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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