Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you.
Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.
Dear….,
My name is Monica Sardi, and I would like to be your new penfriend. I got your name and address from my English teacher. So I am writing to introduce myself to you.
I am 20 years old, and I live in Gothenburg city in Sweden. I am an undergraduate student at Uppsala University studying Literature. I am staying with two other roommates on the university campus. My parents are living on the outskirts of the city. I enjoy being a student as I get to learn the subject I love and interact with people with similar interests as mine, but I don’t like to study on the weekends and public holidays.
My student life keeps me busy, but when I am not studying, I listen to music, read novels, do painting and watch movies. I relish cooking different cuisines occasionally. I can make Indian, Italian, Chinese, Thai, and Japanese dishes but it consumes so much of my time. Recently, I have taken a keen interest in salsa dancing, and it makes me happy.
Anyway, enough about me. What about you? What are your hobbies and interests? What do you like to do in your free time? I hope you will write soon and tell me everything about yourself. Waiting for your reply.
Best wishes,
Monica
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- Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself Tell them what you like doing in your free time Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Uppsala University studying Literature. I am staying with two other roommates on ...
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Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u? What are your hobbies and interests? What do you like to do in your free time? I ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58525345622 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62405879408 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2412807684 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3684210526 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4210526316 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.31578947368 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314513934711 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100621369645 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123815118001 0.0603063233224 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197503353989 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193464937627 0.0580467560999 333% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.