Dear John
My English Teacher told me that you are looking for a Pen Friend. I’m writing this letter to introduce myself.
I’m 24 years old. I live in Delhi in a rental property. My Parents lives in Saharanpur. I am working as CS trainee in a Multinational Company. My key profile is to look after the annual compliances and assist my manager to convene Board Meetings. I’m also pursuing for MA(Eng) from Shyama Prasad Mukherjee College, Punjabi Bagh, Delhi.
I‘m a extrovert person. Exercise is the main part of my daily regime as I am a fitness freek. Everyday I go to central park for jogging before getting ready for office. I am a foodie person and love to try different cuisines. My most favourite pastime is to listen old music albums. I am really fond of action movies therefore I make sure to plan a movie with friends every month. Although I have a six day working schedule still I manage to get free time for my leisure activities.
Enough about me, what about you? What you like to do in your spare time? What are your likes and dislikes? Are you working? There is so much to know about you.
Hope you will write to me as soon as possible.
Warm Wishes
Megha
- Companies spend millions each year on advertising online in magazines and on billboards These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism 61
- Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself Tell them what you like doing in your free time Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
Suggestion: Pen-Friend; Penfriend
...cher told me that you are looking for a Pen Friend. I’m writing this letter to introduce m...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... introduce myself. I’m 24 years old. I live in Delhi in a rental property. My ...
^
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ee College, Punjabi Bagh, Delhi. I‘m a extrovert person. Exercise is the main ...
^
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, I'?
Suggestion: Every day, I
...y daily regime as I am a fitness freek. Everyday I go to central park for jogging before g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42351714594 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9112790879 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 44.5909090909 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.81818181818 16.8248392259 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243833742434 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757712551825 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103818233993 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156596445806 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143166860128 0.0580467560999 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 70.7449484536 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.57 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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