your former home county family is coming to see you in your home country and stay for a week. 1) make plan to meet them at convenient location 2)suggest date and time 3) suggest some activity you may all participate in during their visit.
Dear Mark
I am glad to know that you are visiting me and writing about the mail I received last night from you. I have waited for all of you to see. I excited to see your mail and eager to meet you, here in London. I will come to airport to receive you and I have some amazing plan to share with you.
I got to know about your itinerary, you shared in mail. According to the plan you are coming to London on 1 Jan at 6 pm and staying at the hotel near to the airport for a week. I took off from my busy schedule to spent some leisure time with you. On 2 Jan in morning, we are meeting up at the London eye which is near by your hotel. we will roam around the place as it has scenic scene and river and we will go for lunch and after that you may go to your hotel for real if you feel jetlag.
On the very third day, I have some plan to visit museum and some historical places in London. In the evening time, I will take you to the university club which has some recreational facilities such as pool, badminton court and video game rooms. I am looking forward to meet you and to your family and really want to spend some wonderful moments.
Regaards
Deepak
- some people are thinking that books loosing their importance everywhere, whilst other thinks they are not. At what extent you agree or disagree. 89
- your former home county family is coming to see you in your home country and stay for a week. 1) make plan to meet them at convenient location 2)suggest date and time 3) suggest some activity you may all participate in during their visit. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u. I have waited for all of you to see. I excited to see your mail and eager to m...
^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and eager to meet you, here in London. I will come to airport to receive you and...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ome amazing plan to share with you. I got to know about your itinerary, you s...
^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...e meeting up at the London eye which is near by your hotel. we will roam around the pla...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...London eye which is near by your hotel. we will roam around the place as it has sc...
^^
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... video game rooms. I am looking forward to meet you and to your family and really want ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00427350427 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02733979761 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4403151805 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338661836826 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131047704558 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581764287493 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241057651717 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341352135215 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.