Dear Manju,
It is nice to hear from you after a long time. I am thrilled to know that you are planning to visit Bangalore with your family next week.
I can't forget our last meeting in Mumbai. How amazing it was, wasn't it? I still remember the famous places where we went, whether it's a Juhu Chaupati, Mariane Beach or Filmcity. The most memorable experience was for me to meet my favorite Bollywood celebrities like Amitabh Bacchan and Salman Khan at one place in the film city. I am still having their autographs with me.
Now, it's my time to show you popular places in Bangalore. I have planned everything. We will start with Coorg hill station, and we will spend two days there to explore the remarkable wild-life centuries. Then, we will move to Sakleshpur for three days to enjoy sloppy hilly areas which are surrounded by Coffee and Tea plantation. Here, we can explore multiple options inclusive mountain trekking, Bunging jumping, river rafting, sight-seeing, and many others.
I am super excited to meet you all. I am missing Aunty's hand-made chocolate cake. If I hadn't eaten those in my last visit, I would have never come to know about Aunty's hands magic. So, don't forget to arrive here without the delicious cake.
Please give my best regards to Aunty And Uncle.
See you soon!
Ajay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...galore with your family next week. I cant forget our last meeting in Mumbai. How ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... meeting in Mumbai. How amazing it was, wasnt it? I still remember the famous places ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he famous places where we went, whether its a Juhu Chaupati, Mariane Beach or Filmc...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...aving their autographs with me. Now, its my time to show you popular places in B...
^^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...g Auntys hand-made chocolate cake. If I hadnt eaten those in my last visit, I would h...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e to know about Auntys hands magic. So, dont forget to arrive here without the delic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7850877193 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43241596566 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4904661099 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6111111111 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158344344907 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050895121868 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625700927073 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812763049767 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797557126289 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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