Your pen friend lives in an English-speaking country. You want to visit him and find a summer job.
1) describe the kind of job you would like to find
2) Ask for information about the employment agencies you could apply to.
3) Ask for information about language schools.
Dear Leena,
How are you? Sorry, It's been a long time since I got in touch with you. As summer vacations are approaching; therefore, I am planning to visit your country next month.
This time, I would like to opt for a full-time HR job there. Since I have done my masters in Human Resource management, I think it would be easy to fetch a role in the same domain. I am having six months of job experience too that I received through a college Summer internship. What's your advice on it?
To get my CV floated in multiple companies, I will be required employment agencies contact details. Could you please help me in understanding that list? Since you are a native citizen there, it will be easy for you to filter genuine companies.
I know to get through Job in Germany, one has to be proficient enough in a native language. Therefore, I am wondering about taking a crash course in the same, until I get a job there. If you recommend a few institutes name, then it will be a great help of me.
I am eagerly waiting for your suggestion!
Take care and see you soon.
Radha,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.535 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64185067708 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5825629513 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250207026255 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845892570484 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429937433039 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124237466912 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254521052648 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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