Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated.Write a letter to your friend.Say what type of party should be held e.g themed,fancy dress,black tie eventSuggest a suitable venueMake re
Dear hardy,
I am delighted to celebrate birthday party with you after a long time. Last week I have attended my friend's farewell party, where the pattern of the event was well-organized and I suggest to have the similar one if you are interested.
To elaborate, the party was organized as an outdoor event for 50 members in rooftop restaurant, where the arrangement for lighting and buffet dinner were taken care by the restaurant staffs. It was cost effective too as the price was quoted only for room and DJ facilities.
To make some differences, we shall add the theme of fancy dress for making this birthday occasion as fun-filled memories for everyone. The flow of party is like welcoming the visitors with drink, cake cutting, any fun activities conducted by official partners followed with dinner and DJ, so that the Friends will be till the end of party without getting bored. In case, if you are wishing to book the same restaurant, please let me know thus we can afford ut with discount too.
I am eagerly awaiting to see you soon at your birthday party and thank you so much for inviting me.
Best wishes
Sakthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear hardy, I am delighted to celebrate birthday par...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest having'.
Suggestion: suggest having
...n of the event was well-organized and I suggest to have the similar one if you are interested. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quoted only for room and DJ facilities. To make some differences, we shall add t...
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Line 13, column 379, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... without getting bored. In case, if you are wishing to book the same restaurant, please let...
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Line 17, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and thank you so much for inviting me. Best wishes Sakthi
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...much for inviting me. Best wishes Sakthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58096621311 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2449065224 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111871270377 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411059065499 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384583783156 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067507168773 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324117519783 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.