While selecting employment, some person think salary is important to choose a job and some other think atmosphere is important to choose a job. Give both view and your opinion.
Employment is one of the vital reason for human being to have sophisticated lifestyle. While some persons think salary should be given preference for choosing a job, others are outweighing it stating that place is the main sorting point to opt for a work. According to my view, I agree with the people who choose income when selecting a job offer.
Even though there are many criteria in opting the work, the first and foremost option will be salary because most of the employers give cent percent dedication and hard work, when satisfied with their pay and not other factors. As most of their lifetime is spent for work, their need can only be compensated with the amount they earn, which makes them happy. For instance, if the person is placed for work with average salary of 10000 per month and when compelling to work for more than 15 hours for a day might bring him stress, where he obviously compare the work timing with salary given that's make him more frustrated. On the other hand, while considering the economic factors, money plays a significant role in all life to at least the basic need of self and as a family.
While considering a sex factor, location plays an important role to select a job where safety and security is given weightage. Even though the salary is low, the employers should be feeling comfortable with the diversity in which they work to avoid mistakes and give high number of productivity which inversely gain profit to the employee. Moreover, it keeps then relax and stress free to complete the work fast too. For example, at least a basic hygiene related facility should be there and checked on weekly basis.
To conclude, money enrich the human life and comprises many of the essential feature which only can make person happy, give fame and food to be alive in this world. Thus, while choosing a job, wooing on money is best and novel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72121212121 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36472391452 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0146924812 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19893218951 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780104454838 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892647584621 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139719026999 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865460869103 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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