Dear Sahil,
Many congratulations to you and your family for buying a new apartment in Model Town, and I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness.
Yesterday, I felt overwhelmed to hear this news from your brother. He informed told me that both of you have decided to shift your house furniture from your old apartment to a new one on coming Sunday. I would like to volunteer in this activity since your both were worried about managing this activity because of the valuable items in your house.
Recently, I've shifted to my new home in the same neighborhood. I know a few of the topmost packers and movers companies in the town. If you haven't booked anyone, you can found some of the enclosed business cards in this letter for contacting packers and movers companies.
Also, could you please send me the address of your new place? I want to see the interior and exterior designs of your new apartment. what is the best time to come and meet you at your new home?
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in Model Town I hope you are doing well Yesterday I felt overwhelmed to hear thi...
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...was worried about managing this activity As you know recently Ive shifted to my n...
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...professional workers in the town If you havent booked anyone you can found some of the...
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...acting packers and movers companies Besides could you please send me the address of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57954545455 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4853912009 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 176.0 16.3608247423 1076% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 806.0 76.5299724578 1053% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 176.0 16.8248392259 1046% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 4.34317383033 852% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239838295204 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239838295204 0.0766984524023 313% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119475699419 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537754925957 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 88.1 8.37731958763 1052% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -90.24 70.7449484536 -128% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 69.6 7.45979381443 933% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.24 7.59969072165 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 72.4 8.54432989691 847% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 8.15463917526 699% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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