Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing great. Anyways, I am thankful to you for looking after my apartment as I’ll be traveling to my hometown.
As you know I have shifted to a new flat, let me provide you the new address of my home. I am living in the Southall building on street 5, Kings Lane road adjacent to McDonald's’. Let me provide you more information about the flat. It has three bedrooms along with a living room and a kitchen. You’ll find the keys to your guest room on the roof of a refrigerator. Besides, you can enjoy taking bath in the Jacuzzi on weekends with a glass of wine.
Moreover, please do not forget to pick up the newspapers from the front door. Also, I have informed my cousin to pick up copper from the house since you are allergic to dogs. So, you’ll have a comfortable stay in my home.
Furthermore, if there any problems you can contact me or my cousin while I’m away from the city. I’ll be coming back after six days on Friday night, and I’ll take you for dinner to the Chinese restaurant that has recently opened in our town. Once again, thank you for your help.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon after my holidays.
Regards,
Shwatank
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- Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses while others think they are negative Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47272727273 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42931476922 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5713816338 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2321366822 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079475024723 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064974473976 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129062762938 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380996143371 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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