Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter.
- offer to help him/her to move
- explain how exactly you can help
- ask him/her questions about the new house
Dear Divya,
First of all, many congratulations on your new home that you bought in Model Town. I was extremely happy after hearing the news from your mother about buying a new house in my neighborhood.
Your mother told me that you’ll shift your furniture along with all housing stuff on Sunday since you are busy with your clients from Monday to Saturday for a few weeks. I would love to volunteer myself in helping you to shift your stuff from your old apartment to a new one.
As you know, last year I too have shifted to my new home in the Model Town. I’ve saved a contact of packers and movers in my cellphone for future use. So, I’ll call them at your place on Sunday with regards to your approval if you haven’t booked any packers and movers for shifting your stuff. Also, I’ll be helping you to make a list of important items required while moving house stuff from one place to another.
Moreover, could you please provide me the address of your new apartment? Also, what is the size in square yards of your new apartment?
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut buying a new house in my neighborhood Your mother told me that youll shift you...
^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...neighborhood Your mother told me that youll shift your furniture along with all hou...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uff from your old apartment to a new one As you know last year I too have shifted...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...hifted to my new home in the Model Town Ive saved a contact of packers and movers i...
^^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...overs in my cellphone for future use So Ill call them at your place on Sunday with ...
^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ay with regards to your approval if you havent booked any packers and movers for shift...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and movers for shifting your stuff Also Ill be helping you to make a list of import...
^^^
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng house stuff from one place to another Moreover could you please provide me the...
^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ze in square yards of your new apartment I am hoping to hear from you soon Warm ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33663366337 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16476493749 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 202.0 16.3608247423 1235% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 876.0 76.5299724578 1145% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 202.0 16.8248392259 1201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 60.0 4.34317383033 1381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250960481794 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250960481794 0.0766984524023 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144887629953 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607900285631 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 100.0 8.37731958763 1194% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -108.17 70.7449484536 -153% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.5 7.45979381443 1052% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.37 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.69 7.59969072165 206% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.8 8.54432989691 969% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut buying a new house in my neighborhood Your mother told me that youll shift you...
^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...neighborhood Your mother told me that youll shift your furniture along with all hou...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uff from your old apartment to a new one As you know last year I too have shifted...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...hifted to my new home in the Model Town Ive saved a contact of packers and movers i...
^^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...overs in my cellphone for future use So Ill call them at your place on Sunday with ...
^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ay with regards to your approval if you havent booked any packers and movers for shift...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and movers for shifting your stuff Also Ill be helping you to make a list of import...
^^^
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng house stuff from one place to another Moreover could you please provide me the...
^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ze in square yards of your new apartment I am hoping to hear from you soon Warm ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33663366337 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16476493749 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 202.0 16.3608247423 1235% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 876.0 76.5299724578 1145% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 202.0 16.8248392259 1201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 60.0 4.34317383033 1381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250960481794 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250960481794 0.0766984524023 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144887629953 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607900285631 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 100.0 8.37731958763 1194% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -108.17 70.7449484536 -153% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.5 7.45979381443 1052% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.37 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.69 7.59969072165 206% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.8 8.54432989691 969% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.