Your friend is coming to stay in your neighborhood. He has asked some information about the school.
- Describe the school
- Give your opinion
- Why his/her children would like it
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I received your letter yesterday stating that you are moving to my neighborhood to the nearby vicinity. I must say that i got overwhelmed with this news. It's always great to live near people who are dear to you and shares the same mindset. In your letter you have asked about a good school for your kids admission.
I would like to share the experience where my kids are studying. It's a great school with multi-talented faculty. Staff strength is around 40 teaching approximately 500 students. It is an English medium school with some of the PHD teachers as well. All the teachers are well learned and devoted to the quality of education.
I would highly recommend this school owing to certain reasons such as, teachers are very kind and give due attention to each & every student. They not only focus on quality education but also pay considerate attention towards extra curricular activities.
I am quite sure that your children would like the atmosphere and will adjust in the new environment soon. School is beautifully decorated with educational alpha-numeric charts on the wall. Furthermore, there is a big playing ground where children can enjoy multiple out-door sports.
I look forward to your early arrival. Please do not hesitate to ask for any support.
Yours Truly,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
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Suggestion: I
...to the nearby vicinity. I must say that i got overwhelmed with this news. Its alw...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... a good school for your kids admission. I would like to share the experience whe...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... experience where my kids are studying. Its a great school with multi-talented facu...
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...ts. It is an English medium school with some of the PHD teachers as well. All the teachers ...
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...on towards extra curricular activities. I am quite sure that your children would...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to ask for any support. Yours Truly, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96460176991 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70037944322 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672566371681 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3102286953 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5555555556 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285303626401 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787044532221 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848041965801 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12688635289 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412332159089 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.