Dear Bhadresh
How are you? Hope you find this letter in good health also I am at top of my world. I am writing this latter to inform you that our plan for watchig a movie could not become success due to I have unavoidable circumstances.
Let me explain, I have received a call from my grandfather that my grandmother got her ankle fractured after slipped down in bathroom at home.
Therefore I have to go my village for taking care of my grandmother. I understand your excitement for this plan and I am going spoil your wish. I know it is disheartened for you therefore I would like to suggest you that one of my friend Bijal have free time nowadays as he just passed out his entrance examination.
He was looking stress off and searching a good company to watch movie. According to me, it will better for both of you to see movie togather. I have asked him to contact you.
Bijal would be best to accompany you because he has knock of jokes and he knows all the roads and maps very well so it will be easy to go at theatre.
I hope you will enjoy a lot.
Your lovingly
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...fter slipped down in bathroom at home. Therefore I am going to my village to take care o...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...care of my grandmother. One of my friend Bijal have free time nowadays as he just...
^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is entrance examination. He was looking stress off and he is searching a good co...
^^
Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...earching a good company to watch movie. According to me, it will better for both of you to see ...
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Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a good company to watch movie. According to me, it will better for both of you to...
^^
Line 8, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will better for both of you to see movie togather. I have asked him to contact y...
^^
Line 8, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e togather. I have asked him to contact you. Bijal would be best to accompany...
^^
Line 10, column 53, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'knocked'.
Suggestion: knocked
...be best to accompany you because he has knock of jokes and he knows all the roads and...
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Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you will enjoy a lot. Your lovingly Manish
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33529411765 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44145994102 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5590787289 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246585547801 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103151331544 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644376326121 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11387714052 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531313097495 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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