Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You have found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with.
Dear Ram,
Hope you find this letter in great health. I am writing to you to inform that our plan to watch a movie together cannot see the light of the day. I can understand that you will be disheartened to hear that and I feel apologetic about it. The reason behind this sudden change is that, I have to travel to my hometown as my grandmother got her ankle fractured and I need to assist her in medical aid.
Though, I met Ramesh today, he has just completed his final year exams and was looking to distress himself. He was planning to watch the same movie this weekend and I asked him to join you for the same. Infact he was looking for a good company and in my view you will enjoy in his companionship. I have also asked him to contact you.
Ramesh would be a perfect fit to go along with you .Firstly, he has a knack of cracking jokes and will keep you engaged in his fun talks. Secondly, he has a good understanding about the city roads and traffic conditions that will help you to reach the movie hall well in time.
I hope you will have a wonderful time.
Your truly
Amit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ld be a perfect fit to go along with you .Firstly, he has a knack of cracking joke...
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Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... be a perfect fit to go along with you .Firstly, he has a knack of cracking jokes and w...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21052631579 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32491578271 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0176804737 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310341116587 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123605842848 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664170552933 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179074291004 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022470858472 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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