Your friend had a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- explain why you cannot go anymore
- you say who can go instead of you
- say why this person is a good person to go with it
Dear David,
I'm writing to let you know that I can't come with you to the movie theatre this Saturday night and I'm super sorry for that. I know how much thought you put to plan for a weekend, but something necessary has come up for me and unfortunately, I can't make it.
Let me explain. You remember my uncle Jack who moved to Italy, right? Do you live in our neighborhood would by so many chips and chocolates for us after school! The point is, he is coming from Rome to pay us a visit TN exactly on this weekend at 7 p.m.
But don't worry; you won't be alone because I've already found the best substitution on the Earth! Tom, our piano classmate which also live nearby. He has not only agreed to come with you, you but also said that she had always wanted to be in our group.
There is that I picked her is that you too have a very friendly and intimate relationship in the class. Amazingly, she also so he's really into movies just like you. I'm sure you too two can talk about the movie and its director and the cast for several hours; which is something you really love.
Once again, please forgive me that I couldn't be with you. You I'm sure you will understand my situation.
See you soon,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear David, Im writing to let you know that I cant com...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d, Im writing to let you know that I cant come with you to the movie theatre this...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e movie theatre this Saturday night and Im super sorry for that. I know how much t...
^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...has come up for me and unfortunately, I cant make it. Let me explain. You remembe...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...xactly on this weekend at 7 p.m. But dont worry; you wont be alone because Ive al...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...t dont worry; you wont be alone because Ive already found the best substitution on ...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ip in the class. Amazingly, she also so hes really into movies just like you. Im su...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o hes really into movies just like you. Im sure you too two can talk about the mov...
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Line 11, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... Once again, please forgive me that I couldnt be with you. You Im sure you will under...
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Line 11, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...give me that I couldnt be with you. You Im sure you will understand my situation. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2683982684 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22382768415 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.859789485 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384763955007 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167332733009 0.0766984524023 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620749077754 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218173705394 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048836103969 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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