Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you cannot go anymore
• Say who can go instead of you
• Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Jane,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you that I will not be able to accompany you to the movie which we were about to watch next Friday. I am extremely sorry about changing the plan at the last minute.
My final exams are about to start on Thursday and I have to prepare for the exams. I have received the date sheet from one of my classmates today only. This is my last year of master’s degree and I need to accomplish excellent grades for my better future.
You need not dismiss the plan. My younger brother, Raman will accompany you to the movie. He was also asking for the same movie as he is also very interested in science fiction as you. Moreover, you know each other and enjoy each other company hence, I asked him about it. He said he will call you tomorrow for further plans but if you are ready for the same.
I am sorry for backing out the last moment. I hope you will understand my circumstances and write back with your decision.
Best Wishes,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33854166667 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19403166718 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0177725134 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278086898066 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103997695342 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835507451938 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165974578106 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976479731396 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.