Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.
Write an email to your friend. In your email
• describe where you lived when you were a student at the university
• recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation
• warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
Dear Raghu,
I am happy to hear that you have secured your admission in "University of Delhi" campus for graduation, it is indeed a big achievement and I would like to congratulate you on this success. As you asked my advise on chossing the accommodation, here I am providing you the details.
I used to live as a paying guest in "New friends colony" here all basic amenities are available like public park, hospital and 24*7 water and electricity supply. On top of that this residancy is situated in the vicinity of the college, one can easily commute daily by walk or public transport.
I found my place with the help of rental aggrigator website "NoBroker.com" and I would like to advise you the same as it is free of cost and all listed properties are authentic and genuine.
At the same time I would like to caution you to some fake property brokers they useually approach you with lucrative tenant deals whereas, in most of the cases they just dump you in an unconvinent house and dupe you a siginficiant amount. Hence, I would say stay away from them and make use of given website.
Hope you will find my suggestions and feedback useful.
Let me know if any further information is required, I am happy to respond you.
Best wishes,
Lokesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...te you on this success. As you asked my advise on chossing the accommodation, here I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, whereas, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83408071749 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09175833715 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645739910314 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2461227015 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254115103428 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808654935871 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633509852634 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112284619311 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586542611111 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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