Dear Shain,
It's giving me immense pleasure while writing this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. I am well aware about the toil u had put to make your dream come true.
I am sure now you have started having goosebumps thinking about the present i bought for you. Yes!! You are guessing right. It's a wall clock which i promised to you.
All the friends and I are planning to come to your place. I think, that would be the best time to give you the present as, we can not only see your new house but can also have a small get together. So, be ready for the party and if you have other plans please let me know.
Well, I bought this gift for you because you wanted to have it since long time and because of the budget you weren't able to buy this. And do you remember, that I promised to you that when you will buy new home I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise.
See you soon!!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easure while writing this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. ...
^^
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... this. First of all, Congratulations!! for your dream house. I am well aware about...
^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g goosebumps thinking about the present i bought for you. Yes!! You are guessing ...
^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... for you. Yes!! You are guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. ...
^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Yes!! You are guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. All...
^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...guessing right. Its a wall clock which i promised to you. All the friends and I...
^
Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...you because you wanted to have it since long time and because of the budget you were...
^^^^
Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...long time and because of the budget you werent able to buy this. And do you remember, ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t able to buy this. And do you remember, that I promised to you that when you wil...
^^
Line 6, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
...u will buy new home I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise. See ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 249, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me I ll give you it as present? So here i am keeping my promise. See you soon!!
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06010928962 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10774597385 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2280672891 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1538461538 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378940815576 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131446699616 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668303715773 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220174170025 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593947142559 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.8 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.