Dear Priya,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health I got your letter yesterday in which you are seeking assistance to spend a significant amount of money that you have won from lottery.
First of all , this news is like music to my ears so I couldn't wait to pen down my emotions. This is a moment of celebration and I wish heartiest congratulation to entire family. However, it is quite intrinsic to invest money tactfully . For this, you must take life insurance to secure the future of the family . Besides, it is good idea to get a plentiful space which you can construct later. Moreover , you should save your money in bank as fixed deposit that will benefit you in the long-term due to spectacular interest rate.
Lastly , it is inescapable to being spendthrift after possessing big Mount of money. So , if you resist splurging money on frivolous matters , you can organise the money in better way else it can ruin ones. I know you will use it wisely and can't wait to hear back that my device work for you or not.
lots of love.
your friend,
Sherry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...u have won from lottery. First of all , this news is like music to my ears so I...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...this news is like music to my ears so I couldnt wait to pen down my emotions. This is a...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'wish the heartiest'.
Suggestion: wish the heartiest
.... This is a moment of celebration and I wish heartiest congratulation to entire family. Howeve...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uite intrinsic to invest money tactfully . For this, you must take life insurance ...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rance to secure the future of the family . Besides, it is good idea to get a plent...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which you can construct later. Moreover , you should save your money in bank as f...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to spectacular interest rate. Lastly , it is inescapable to being spendthrift ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
... rate. Lastly , it is inescapable to being spendthrift after possessing big Mount ...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... after possessing big Mount of money. So , if you resist splurging money on frivol...
^^
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ist splurging money on frivolous matters , you can organise the money in better wa...
^^
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ones. I know you will use it wisely and cant wait to hear back that my device work f...
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Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lots
...k that my device work for you or not. lots of love. your friend, Sherry.
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Line 10, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...ork for you or not. lots of love. your friend, Sherry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55154639175 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51530795128 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5622399248 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163336382378 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662543788995 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892367743536 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110501075406 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646708155512 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.