From the past few years, notable changes have been occurring in climate due to the outbreak of technology. Some people say that it cannot be bridled by the government. Although citizens can play their significant rules to bring positive changes in climate. In my opinion, this is the mutual responsibility of both.
To kick off, there are a variety of forces that causes change in climate such as global warming and gas emissions. As government rules the economy, its laws and regulations can work against these factors. First of all, government should promote public transports so everyone can travel via a single vehicle rather than fuelling personal cars bikes. For example, installation of metro buses and trains has been very environment friendly and similar initiatives should be taken more to curb this problem. Moreover, many industries raise this issue by releasing toxic gases in the centre of the town. To tackle this issue ,government should not permit them to establish factories in the residential area. More than that , campaigns should be conducted to aware people about the importance of trees. In the same way , people can be motivated to plant more trees and higher taxes should be imposed on unnecessary cutting of trees.
On the flip side, individual can be more productive if they acknowledge their effective rules. However, their contribution is small but the real change comes with the compound effect of hundred small activities. To exemplify this, if every person is supposed to plant a single tree , million of trees can be grown. Besides, reduction in smoking and less usage of private vehicles can be highly efficient to control this problem.
To recapitulate , according to above preceding discussion , I am highly inclined to my notion. Also ,I firmly believe that their joint efforts can promptly rehabilitate the climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it cannot be bridled by the government. Although citizens can play their significant rul...
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...erson is supposed to plant a single tree , million of trees can be grown. Besides,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75705539926 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7718061037 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6111111111 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20999238363 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623147661206 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297851434929 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118999170019 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579853052192 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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